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Witness me like this. You haven’t seen enough yet. Take away my demons before I make your heart stop beating. You’ll never have to wait for me after you say hello. Stitch up my pieces just so you can break them apart again. The pain is like a sin. Let me suck out your life and breathe in your soul. I’ll put a mark on you, you’ll make a deal. Keep a promise, keep those lies. I have a feeling you’re a fake but I still crave you. So don’t wait for me. I’ll feed you my pain. I’ll tear you in two. You’ll look me right in the eyes and see the true me. You’ll see my past, my present, and my tomorrow. Only darkness drips from my tongue. You can’t hold my hand. You can’t get close. You’ll let me in. You’ll drink the poison from my lips. I’ll make you feel what I feel inside. It’ll be your biggest regret and your greatest mistake. You will find my failures. My red eyes seek revenge, I’ve found it in you. You had everything and gave it up to me. I’m the one that is unfaithful. You’re so used to the bored expression turn into an evil grin as quickly as you hide from me. Won’t you save a part of me that’s broke again? You can’t run from me, even if he tastes the same. My mind is a jail cell, with memories locked up for good and key trashed. My insanity is in shambles. You’ll still say my name. Don’t you see we torture each other? Our love is based on revenge. I’ll kill you before all of this is over. You won’t let me go until I’ve taken what you cherish
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This is well written, the emotion is easy to find and feel while reading it. I Love the similes and metaphors used here, it helps us find a way to relate to it one way or another.
I always find your work ingenious.
Not enough words for a critique so this isn't a critique exactly.
I always find your work ingenious.
Not enough words for a critique so this isn't a critique exactly.